Well UberQuest isn't about to get Shakespearean and be all "Art thou going to the east in yonder forest to search for ye food?" Sure it's a fantasy setting but it's not an equivalent to the 1600s of Earth. I don't think anyone anticipates that, but yeah.>>7230
You mean Claire's forced innuendos? It is *meant* to be cringy. Honestly, we're not trying to do anything different with our dialogue - if anything it feels more organic and easier to write now than ever before.
Characters grow into themselves, certainly. We had hints about certain traits that are maybe more apparent now. Subverting certain tropes - like say making Kibbles more than just the sweet,polite,clumsy type.. she can be sassy and demanding in her presence (Its not as sudden as you think http://uberquest.katbox.net/comic/39-the-adventure-of-learning/
,) Instead of making Sesame a tsundere,serious hero with a temper problem she can bite off more than she can chew, act too cocky or sensitive to others feelings.
It's an attempt to layer them and make them see, more three dimensional.
Though point taken about the dialogue, we will continue to work on it to make the comic better.