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ID: 98b51  No.7219[Reply][Last 50 Posts]

Old thread hit it's limit, so starting this one with the latest from Chalo's Tumblr.
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ID: 27be3  No.7870

In my head its easy enough to picture that as Randal. Good enough

ID: 27f40  No.7871

I still haven't gotten an answer as to what Knighthood needs to actually be a better story, short of axing it.

I guess I'll take what I got as "Just imitate Obsidian as much as possible".

I'll just… sneak my way out of this thread before I get pulled into the impending shitstorm in the new thread.

ID: 262e3  No.7872

Save it for the next page and we have something NEW to talk about.

ID: 4728a  No.7873


One of the reasons no one answers you is that I don't think anyone really reads Knighthood. Because it's not very good, but it's also not bad in an interesting way. It's just there. It's derivative and bland and not even worth reading to see "Oh what is it this time?" if you were the sort so inclined.

The problem with Knighthood is that it gets one of the premises of single protagonist-centric fiction wrong. Such a series is supposed to hook you by making you think that the main character is interesting in some way, and draw you in by showing you why they're interesting, how other people relate to them and are connected to them, and that way get you interested in the challenges they face.

The problem with Knighthood is that it's clear that the writer just takes it for granted that everyone finds his main character as interesting as he does. He thinks she's fascinating and amazing and cool, and so just proceeds under the assumption that it goes without saying and all he needs to do is keep giving her opportunities to show it off. Which is great if all you're looking for is someone to do some super kung-fu and that's all it takes to get you invested in a character, otherwise it's just kind of meh.

In other words, Knighthood's failure started from the beginning with how it tells its story. You can't "fix" it at this point without starting over.

ID: 858d1  No.7874


I think the story is OK the way it is, but maybe add a little fanservice in it like in LL.

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ID: ec1ea  No.7722[Reply]

BIG news for fans of Peter is the Wolf fans. Check it!
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ID: da5f2  No.7732

Wait is this white lightning the same company that use to print not furry ninja high school or something along those lines?

ID: c72f9  No.7733


Is *that* why he's pushing Sarah Hazen as much as he has?

Because… hey, uh, Kris? Where are the other Thralls? Are they just dead? Sarah's the only on-screen example?

ID: c08c6  No.7735


Not Ninja High School, and yes.


Yup. And his other main focus is an "Akane Hulk" fanfic series where Akane turns into a bulging-muscled two-brain-celled brute.

ID: c7609  No.7738

It's funny. At Bar-1's booth at MWFF I thought the same thing about the shirts.

ID: c72f9  No.7781

I didn't even know intelligence drain was even a fetish.

And here I was, cranking one SHulk after another, but with different skins!

I guess to be fair to PITW, for all the egregious tonal whiplash and the dodgy art BAR-1 makes, it did kind of introduce me to an author whose works I've not only read until I wore out the figurative tape, but also paid me to do something fun.

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ID: 61284  No.7266[Reply]

Hakuna Matata
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ID: 6cbb1  No.7682

Poor choice of words.

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ID: ed019  No.7693

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Uh Oh Spaghettios!

Maybe Kibbles will have her trial in time to join them.

ID: 61284  No.7705

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ID: 4cb7e  No.7706

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ID: 9524e  No.7670[Reply]

Six years in the making. My sweat and blood, help a mexiCAN wolf make it happen? I ask you to pledge and share the word.

ID: 9524e  No.7671

Please don´t ban me, we´re all in it together.

ID: 9524e  No.7672

yiffing, gore, vore, terraforming, cyberpunk!

ID: d61b3  No.7673

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>gore, vore

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ID: 8f41f  No.1646[Reply]

a FNAF comic by Brianxkaren
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ID: 2f8c7  No.6914

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ID: 2cd6d  No.5382[Reply][Last 50 Posts]

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ID: 5a4b7  No.7230

I feel like the overall dialogue quality has gone down since Sesame came back from that dream trip.
Maybe it's intentionnal, but between the forced sexual innuendos and every characters spouting slangs regardless of who they are (Kibs especially)

Almost feel forced, this trop describe this well : http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TotallyRadical

ID: d9dca  No.7231

you know, that is a bit true, what kind of speech am I suppose to expect to be common? I mean its true theres always gonna be slang, but sorta just dunno what kind of speech am I suppose to expect of this so I can know "ok that sorta slang doesnt work"

language if not dialogue is a tough thing to deal and manage when writing.

ID: 26907  No.7232

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Well UberQuest isn't about to get Shakespearean and be all "Art thou going to the east in yonder forest to search for ye food?" Sure it's a fantasy setting but it's not an equivalent to the 1600s of Earth. I don't think anyone anticipates that, but yeah.


You mean Claire's forced innuendos? It is *meant* to be cringy. Honestly, we're not trying to do anything different with our dialogue - if anything it feels more organic and easier to write now than ever before.

Characters grow into themselves, certainly. We had hints about certain traits that are maybe more apparent now. Subverting certain tropes - like say making Kibbles more than just the sweet,polite,clumsy type.. she can be sassy and demanding in her presence (Its not as sudden as you think http://uberquest.katbox.net/comic/39-the-adventure-of-learning/ , http://uberquest.katbox.net/comic/109-breakin-da-rules/ ,) Instead of making Sesame a tsundere,serious hero with a temper problem she can bite off more than she can chew, act too cocky or sensitive to others feelings.

It's an attempt to layer them and make them see, more three dimensional.

Though point taken about the dialogue, we will continue to work on it to make the comic better.

ID: 26907  No.7233


It's fantasy but the time-period is around the Age of Steam/Just prior to the Industrial Revolution -so 1800s - ish. As steampunk technology exists, some of the values and traditions do resemble more of a 1600s-era but knowledge and tech is a bit more modern.

ID: e217d  No.7234


Well not so much difficult to read as a very stark contrast to the previous font. Careful using it during very dramatic moments.

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ID: 07d96  No.6342[Reply][Last 50 Posts]

Old thread hit the bump limit
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ID: 0450b  No.7205

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ID: f0ac5  No.7211

Skidd must have one hell of a view from the roof of that glass house of his.

ID: d5361  No.7215

What bullshit are you on about?

ID: 6ff4b  No.7216

what do you even mean?

ID: 7e335  No.7218

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ID: 3fc32  No.6080[Reply][Last 50 Posts]

New thread since the older is at that bump limit.

So Voltaire, you gonna don a home team baseball outfit and an aluminum bat while you make mopersville a 'better' place?
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ID: 3fc32  No.7014

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RIGHT?! She's practically a walking albatross, bordering on pornographic fetish name even.

ID: 9ee07  No.7015


I'm bored. You're boring, Danberg.

ID: 3fc32  No.7029

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Always the nitpicker, Nanase.

ID: a3f04  No.7030

"Nanase, you sound just like my sister-in-law. Only with about half as much sense"

ID: 3fc32  No.7031

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Man she REALLY hates how magic works.

Can't say I blame her about the name based magic affinity though.

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ID: 57fde  No.6829[Reply]

I'm the only one who likes Slugbox's Ctenophorae?

ID: 72e23  No.6830

I followed it on and off over the months. It's interesting.

ID: edce9  No.6833

It's okay. A little incoherent at times, Slugbox has some difficulties with pacing, layout, and so on.

Also I liked the redheaded catgirl better before he went full-on "fat folds" with her.

ID: 57fde  No.6835


>Also I liked the redheaded catgirl better before he went full-on "fat folds" with her.

Maybe it was to make her stand out from the fit black haired catgirl. Or he has a chubby fetish.

ID: 57fde  No.6836

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ID: b06ad  No.3672[Reply][Last 50 Posts]

Old thread reached the limit.

I don't actually draw things of this nature all that often.
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ID: 2c807  No.6713

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Yep, definitely a wolf infestation.

ID: 524b0  No.6714

Ah the old "Fooling the Jail Guards into abandoning their posts while we free the prisoners" trick…I uh, don't know the short version of what that's called…sorry.

ID: c9ffb  No.6715


Wouldn't rescuing some wolves would be rather low in the impotance scale compared with pretty much getting at war with the tigers too?

Also, I wonder what's Natani gonna do. Will she side with her friends or with the wolves?

ID: 45803  No.6718


Depends on who might be among the captives. I mean, if they've got the fuzzy equivalent of Ulfric Stormcloak in the Wolfpens…

ID: 90848  No.6823

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