ID: 42423 No.12846
Hey guys, I'm currently working on a fanzine I will be printing b/w as soon as it's done, it's called "District F", and it's kinda furry, but not regular furries, as these look smaller and cuter like the ones in Sonic stories, mainly because it will be my way to circumvent the shotacon genre, since where I live is illegal to print any porno stuff involving minors.
Anyway, will be posting the pages I've got so far and then the other ones as I finish them, looking for any kind of input, especially if you got awesome grammar/spelling points since English is obviously not my native language, but feel free to comment about whatever you like as well :)
ID: 0ae8c No.12860
Is he stuttering or saying "P"-pill. Having him stutter at the beginning makes it a little confusing if it's the latter.
ID: 1f05d No.12861
Seems like stuttering since both are stuttering quite a bit on that page.
ID: 42423 No.12864
Indeed, they're both stuttering!
Here's page 9!
ID: 83cf4 No.12902
Kind of hate that people keep using size and cuteness as a scale for age/consent, for furries at least.
Not bad work though, unsure if nipples actually extend that far even if tugged on like that, but her sensitivity in reaction to it is an appreciative touch not everyone goes for.
ID: 42423 No.12903
Thanks! I've been told the nipples I draw look like little mouths, but I'm not really tryna go super realistic here, and I personally really love them more when they resemble squishy little tubes, lol, anyway, thank you very much for you comment! :D