ID: 80934 No.6809
It doesn't really seem like a Keidran thing, so much as Natani's personal prejudices.
ID: f582b No.6825
Wait why is there a 3rd thread now?
ID: e736e No.6826
I made a new one as a preemptive measure since the thread appeared to be reaching it's bump limit.
Unless it's 250 posts, in which case it was a miscalculation on my part.
ID: 124e5 No.6874
Methinks there's not been enough Madoc edits lately. Anyone got any news?
ID: f582b No.6883
Yeah new stuff from him would be awesome. Hes probably busy with real life stuff tho
ID: e736e No.6884
His stuff isn't even my thing and yet I find them amusing enough to want more.
ID: c5ed0 No.6885
I've been busy with an inordinate amount of work, including a werewolf story series that I could try to turn into a comic when it's done, and a selection of modding projects that always ends up being a lot bigger than I thought it would be ( the one I'm working on right now is constantly putting me at risk of turning me into a crumbling skeleton ;~; ).
As for edits/redraws, I'm a bit apprehensive of posting them here, because what ones I haven't posted yet are hyper inflation redraws, unless you're all fine with that. So for now, here's Madelynn as a disposable rocket.
ID: f582b No.6889
I'm completely fine with that, like the guy above it isn't even my thing but I still enjoy it for some reason, I think I might have seen them somewhere else though.
ID: 61a06 No.6891
Disposable? Not sure. Maybe she's just a firework in bed?
ID: f582b No.6893
Anything else you got (which is twokinds related because thats the thread) is good~
ID: f582b No.6900
yey, can't wait to see these finished :D
ID: ef6b4 No.6953
I don't know about you guys but I got to give Tom props.
He's making it work a lot better than I thought he would.
ID: 05d4b No.6954
I'm with you, I'm actually liking this introspective a lot.
ID: da8b4 No.6955
I feel the opposite, especially if the whole event ends with a "well I suppose I spend this huge chunk of my life being silly!" kind of a reunion with the old self that removes the need for the link.
People have hard enough time accepting difficult facts that are plainly in front of them in reality. And, instead, here you have a hallucination with your younger self following you around claiming bullshit that goes against what you've believed for years.
But hey, it's not like Twokinds was ever the pinnacle of writing, especially during Tom's teenage years.
ID: ef6b4 No.6956
That's kind of my point though. Tom's working with stuff he wrote in his teens. It's nice to see him add some more depth to what's mostly been played off for laughs. Shows he's growing as a writer.
I do agree though, if this little dream sequence solves everything about her body mismatch I'll be a bit disappointed.
ID: bbd57 No.6972
This is some good stuff, really. If it were coming faster it'd be even better.
ID: da8b4 No.7003
This is kinda what I meant when I brought up >>6955
Also, chances are chest bindings are currently on fire. Not the first time, either.
ID: f582b No.7022
Ws about to come on and mention that that panel was ripe for many edits, i'm not disappointed :3
ID: c5ed0 No.7023
Let's hope Seff and the others can keep up. =w=
ID: f582b No.7024
Totally, can't wait to see what seff does when tom uploads some of the stuff thats on e621
ID: bbd57 No.7099
And they call it… puppy love…
ID: e736e No.7101
They got that puppin' love~
ID: 1d0f0 No.7105
and not panic…really please do not panic
also I wonder about the other folks who are still on the boat? or did they get off the boat earlier?
ID: bbd57 No.7113
It always had a small crew, and I think most of it already left. Wasn't it explained awhile back that a lot of the boat was enchanted so it only needed a few actual sailors to run it?
ID: 80934 No.7115
Geez Natani, you just barely started resolving the sexual tension between Keith and yourself, and now here you are getting Kat all hot and bothered.
ID: 1d0f0 No.7154
well I only thougth about it cause you know boat is burning so I would expect someone who is the crew would go about telling and getting everyone else off the boat. Since it appears that didnt happen well I have to assume "they must been off the boat and away from it"
ID: 1d0f0 No.7162
whelp I got my answer
just too busy saving things and they thought the others was off board also
I'm at peace…
ID: 27812 No.7192
Man, those wolves are getting everyone against them.
ID: 0af30 No.7198
Put the murder on somebody, Keith.
ID: 80934 No.7222
Natani looks surprisingly dashing there.
ID: e736e No.7280
Have you ever considered breast buoys? That'd be a pretty
interesting sight for the voyage from the burning ship to the land of emotional turmoil.
ID: bbd57 No.7285
"That poor sexy bastard."
ID: e736e No.7311
That second to last panel…either that is a coloring error or Keith gained a little life in his eyes.
ID: 1fe7c No.7318
Haha yeah, I was like wtf? Did she kiss the scleras back into him?
ID: 81272 No.7322
I think its supposed to symbolise/show that hes truly happy for once since he kinda had that whole brooding thing going on until now
ID: bbd57 No.7388
Things are not going very well. Bets though on Trace pulling some magic whammy to hold people in place.
ID: ef6b4 No.7389
That or the Mysterious Templar Guy and his kid do.
ID: 0936f No.7390
I wouldn't mind seeing Trace pull off a 'Vader force choke' on at least one person
ID: e736e No.7399
I also wouldn't mind seeing some magical choke-a-bitch action, but alas I reckon it'd ruin any goodwill Trace may have left with the humans. Remember, the turn of events currently going on isn't unnatural of humankind. Rash, racist, and revengeful…but completely understandable.
ID: ef6b4 No.7401
Not gonna lie, I think the biggest juke Tom could pull here is if the fight just happened. No last minutes saves. Then whatever happened afterwards the characters just had to deal with it.
Might just be me but a lot of webcomics these days pull last minutes saves like we've seen. I'd be interested to see things just go completely wrong at some point.
ID: bbd57 No.7405
Fight scenes can be hard to pull off in webcomic form, so it's understandable why a lot of artists avoid them. I agree the comic could use one but I'm doubtful of it actually happening.
ID: ef6b4 No.7410
That's fair. Though I meant it more for the sake of the plot than to have a fight scene.
The way I've seen it, a lot of web comics put their characters in these tense, high stakes situations only for something to bail them out at the last second…I'm probably wrong about this but I'm not thinking of anything that proves me wrong at this point.
ID: c5ed0 No.7449
I'll have to be honest, by its own merits, seeking shelter from a skirmish by going into a dungeon owned by a very close ally under the pretense of being arrested to avoid further discourse is actually pretty clever, and not something you see very often in fiction. Not on my end, at least.
But, you're right. I can still imagine something nasty waiting for them, or on their way out of the estate.
ID: 1d0f0 No.7450
like we find that theres something down there
ID: ef6b4 No.7451
So long as it doesn't become Attack on Titan's Basement.
ID: c5ed0 No.7471
Clovice, you unrepentant, predictable bitch.
ID: f7cb4 No.7539
Who? Is this some character introduced five years ago then never shown again that I'm supposed to recognize?
ID: 81272 No.7540
the blonde guy is one of the grand Templars (Master Sear I think) and the wold might actually be a character from the past. Specifically it might be the wold from the recent Dragon Masquerade side comic.
Alternatively and more likely, its a new character, might be linked to the masks that appeared in the earlier chapters.
ID: c5ed0 No.7623
The problem, Karen, is that Raine has problems controlling her shifting, unlike her father.
ID: e736e No.7633
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Well if we are going to give the queen some love, may as well post this.
Spoiler'd because it also has a naked Madelyn suffering what is most likely tit envy.
ID: e736e No.7638
Because Madelyn is underage and some people make a big shitfit over fictional material, cub/teen being one of the bigger elephants in the room.
ID: 80934 No.7640
Obligatory reminder that Flora is 13 years old.
ID: e736e No.7641
Sure, in human years. Keidran have shorter lifespans, where as Bastians have human lifespans. So human rules apply to Bastians unfortunately.
ID: 81272 No.7648
Jesus Christ they are fictional charters why do people give a fuck? If tom suddenly said o actualy no maddie is like 20 in human years would it suddenly become acceptable? smh it just seams to stupid :s
ID: e736e No.7650
It's the mixed signals the world has about the real deal. Some parts of the world ban fictional material as well as actual CP which contributes to a chilling effect on the internet, a fear of being on some watchlist over it (if not outright incarceration in those areas previously mentioned). Others just hate it enough just to want it gone entirely, this being an unhealthy line of thought because it promotes a sort of arrogance that ridding of things that aren't ideal to one person from the internet is justifiable, a censorship that is more destructive as a whole to what is ultimately only the business of other adults and their spare time.
But alas, we are getting off track. This isn't /bitch/ after all, but /com/. If we feel so inclined to discuss this further, I recommend starting a thread over there instead of bloating this thread with irrelevance.
ID: bbd57 No.7701
"They're there to provide convenient censorship."
ID: 81272 No.7720
Seams like it, probably due to christmas
ID: b7751 No.7817
d'awww. that's super cute.
ID: bbd57 No.7914
>>7912>That embarrassment at being caught drinking from the fountain
ID: 81272 No.7916
I geuss Trace being friends with Nora contributed to it. Theres also little evidence to suggest that the dragons are unfriendly towards kenderan, and te bastians must have had previous contact with them otherwise the dock guards wouldn't have casually asked Nora to move in the island arc.
ID: 89f09 No.7917
Humans enslave keidran and think of them as inferior, while admiring and even worshipping dragons, so it is not complicated to see the reasons.
ID: e736e No.7966
Huh, I see a hidden line in there in the bubble "It's…a mess."
"I hope the captain is okay."
ID: e736e No.7968
Alternatively, the 'original' personality shifts into the dragon instead. Which would be just as bad considering.
ID: c5ed0 No.7998
As exciting as that sounds, I don't think Tom's the type to suddenly change his comic from TwoKinds to Unsounded.
ID: 1d0f0 No.8061
gotta love mental blocks set up in place just in case~
ID: bbd57 No.8064
Why is this dragon so adorable?
ID: b7751 No.8065
probably because it behaves like a small animal but is big and clumsy.
ID: ef6b4 No.8081
Does…does this imply a piece of Nora's consciousness is inside Trace's mind?
…Dude needs to start charging rent.
ID: bbd57 No.8084
I doubt Nora is actually inside his brain. She probably either looked at the future and knew the other dragon would look, or even the "echo" of her psychic communications with Trace is advanced and powerful enough to know when it's being peeked at.
ID: ef6b4 No.8098
Psychic powers tend to be as nebulous and arbitrary as magic. Look at Akira. But yeah, I admit it's a bit of a stretch.
ID: 1d0f0 No.8182
huh, way she say it: shes bound to the place in a sense thus those guards couldnt even remove her if they wanted to…
also no one check his old estate when they were rounding up wolves…
ID: 6cce6 No.8185
Ok that was funny XD
ID: 63dc7 No.8195
>>8180>that little heart in the last panel
ID: 93c0f No.8232
That he may or may not be (finally) banging Natani now might have something to do with it.
Getting laid does wonders as a stress-reliever.
ID: b7751 No.8281
Okay, Is it weird that I think she's hotter older? She's got this whole "Sexy Librarian" thing going on.
ID: 81272 No.8282
Nah I can totally see what you mean. To be honest I don't think Eric realised that they where the same kendren. Hell I thought Rose died, I guess I need to re-read the book.
ID: 80934 No.8314
Weird seeing someone other than Mike getting Genderbent, but nice art all the same
ID: e736e No.8315
All it's missing is Kat in the background, masturbating furiously at the display.
ID: b7751 No.8321
I'm going to say…fucked her daughter and never wrote.
ID: e736e No.8322
Considering both Natani and Saria were on the cover of that book Fisbach released, I'd assume shit went south between her and Rose.I'd buy it, but I'm broke as fuck now.
ID: 80934 No.8323
It is super easy to find online for free.
ID: 81272 No.8333
Spoilers: Nat stole Rose's place at the dragon masquerade and impersonated her.
ID: 80934 No.8376
How much porn of these two do you think Tom's drawn for himself all these years he's been teasing them in the comic?
ID: e736e No.8377
Plenty, there was a porn stash of his that got leaked once.
He uh…had quite the bodyswapping fetish.
ID: 93c0f No.8381
I'm glad these two are finally on intimate terms (or close to it), but really, it needed to happen many years ago. Seff stopped drawing porn of them because Tom dragged their courtship out for so long.
ID: b7751 No.8382
>>8375>The third floor is off limits
How many pages until we see the third floor?
My bet is on Torture/Evil Experiment room.
ID: 80934 No.8395
Oh I know, I downloaded that pack almost as soon as it was leaked. But that was years ago, and I just wonder if Tom has continued to build a collection since.
ID: ef6b4 No.8443
What I find weird is that I think that extends to Trace. He's standing right there.
Isn't this his house?
ID: 1d0f0 No.8452
I would say that in general, then pull aside the person who owns the place of why the third floor is off limits cause he havent been there in a GOOD LONG WHILE
ID: edfd4 No.8456
He's amnesiac. Up until a few pages ago, he had no idea what his house even looked like.
ID: ef6b4 No.8467
True but we'll have to wait and see.>>8456
That doesn't stop it from being "his" house.
ID: bbd57 No.8473
But it does possibly stop him from being able to handle whatever's on the third floor.
ID: ef6b4 No.8490
So from what I've gather rereading the last few pages, they didn't explicitly refer to his amnesia but the dialogue heavily implied most of them (being the escort) know (and the dragon straight up read his mind). So that's a fair point.
Though another thing that's I find curious is Rose said the reason she's still there is because of Saria, who's been dead for a good long while.
Maybe the third floor has something to do with her?
…Gonna be frank, I'm hoping it's not a torture lab…I think those are overdone.
ID: bbd57 No.8540
Insert trucker snore sound effect here.
ID: bbd57 No.8579
>>8577>or the worst fucking dues ex machina to get pulled out of Tom's ass.
Nope, something with that much setup isn't a deus ex machina. That phrase doesn't mean what you apparently think it does.
One of the defining traits of a deus ex machina is that it comes out of fucking nowhere because there's no other way to resolve a plot. It's usually the result of someone writing themselves into a corner. If it's deliberately set up beforehand and even alluded to as a possible thing before it happens, it's not a deus ex machina.
The closest thing to a writing trope this would be is a "Chekhov's gun".
ID: e736e No.8583
Eh, fair enough. I still think it's flimsy though.
ID: 81272 No.8589
Chekhov's dragon :^)
ID: bbd57 No.8627
"No nuzzling!" All the nuzzling.>>8625
Magical misfires lead to very amusing pics though so head.
"Why did I grow a dick?! Were you thinking of me with a dick?!"
ID: f5e06 No.8690
It's a goddamn tragedy that the leaks of Tom's porn are from before he could draw worth a damn
ID: aea91 No.8691
I'm pretty new to the comic, but is just me or it seems pretty common for female Keidran to go naked while males always wear at least pants or a loincloth?
ID: e736e No.8692
It's both a fan service thing for the peanut gallery viewers, and a compromise of suspension of disbelief on the matter. Namely, that you can cover your cooter and your tits with fur, but you can't cover your cock and balls with fur alone unless they have the ability to retract into your body when not aroused. I do not think Fisbach has the willpower to make that work in his story's universe without it feeling like a saturday morning cartoon.
ID: 80934 No.8700
I wonder if we'll ever get another porn dump with his modern art. Do you think he still even does porn sketches for himself in his downtime?
ID: ef6b4 No.8753
There might not be another stash at all.
I don't know how he handled the first one but if it was negatively he may have either started being more secretive or outright stopped.
Plus since his brother's gotten really popular and has plugged him from time to time, he might be trying not to do anything that'd make him look bad.
ID: 11026 No.8756
Probably is a stash, but after the leak he probably doesn't trust anyone ever again with it.
I do not see reputation as an excuse to not personally draw for yourself. It would be self-destructive of an artist, especially one who does lewds.
ID: 80934 No.8810
Sick burn by Keith with the assassin comment. But who or what is that watching them through the window?
ID: 81272 No.8813
Nora/Spycat, maybe even that new dragon?
ID: bbd57 No.8816
Voyeur dragon is hoping to watch you masturbate.
ID: ef6b4 No.8866
"Chekhov's Gun intensifies"
ID: 81272 No.8867
I'm sure we would all appreciate that. An alternate gender swapped version would also be appreciated if you are so inclined :3
ID: 4922a No.8890
I really, really hope these two get laid tonight. After all these years, they both deserve it.
ID: 80934 No.8916
At this point if Tom doesn't let the two of them bang before they leave the mansion he's going to have a full blown mutiny from his fans.
ID: 11026 No.8923
If he's smart, he'll give a window of implied sex and let the fans use their imagination to fill in the blanks.
ID: ef6b4 No.8994
….Aight Bullshit Theory Time.
What if [Database Error]'s name isn't just a recurring joke?
ID: 81272 No.9000
If his actual name is ever revealed then DB might just be his initials, but that's probably it. Other than that database error/Red is just a recurring joke.
ID: b7751 No.9003
Well wouldn't the initials be DE or DBE? Wait. DBE..Dbe…Debbie. I got it, his neame is Debbie!
ID: 1281f No.9021
It's been years for us, but within the comic's time flow, it was not too long ago that Natani would go to great lengths to not let Keith realize she's in heat and would rather cover herself with a hospital bedside curtain than wear a dress for a short bit while recovering her own robes
I'm all for Natani and Keith getting a happy end for themselves but them getting it on right now would be somewhat OOC for at least one of them
ID: edfd4 No.9026
Except all of that was tied to the gender identity confusion Natani had. Now she's come to terms with it and is more readily willing to accept her feminine identity.
Besides, her identity crisis didn't stop her from kissing Keith.
ID: 1281f No.9027
>>9026>Now she's come to terms with it and is more readily willing to accept her feminine identity.
Which still happened only few hours ago within the comic. Going from obsessively keeping it a secret to "This is how I've always been, I just prefer to be seen as a guy, don't make a big deal out of it" is reasonable. Especially since she kept on losing her clothes so people were learning her "secret" left and right - but the end, nobody bothered her about it, so it wasn't all that bad. The cat was completely out of the bag after the ship blew up anyway, it'd be impossible to keep up the act after showing up in front of everyone without chest bindings on.
Fast forwarding from that to being a-ok with getting laid over few hours seems hella far-fetched.
ID: 11026 No.9032
Softcore porn tends to take it's time.
ID: 80934 No.9039
12 years and 737 pages later…
Jesus Christ I've been reading this comic for a long time.
ID: 1836f No.9042
Goddamn, I keep forgetting how bad this comic used to look.
ID: bbd57 No.9043
I prefer to be impressed by how good it looks now.
It's nice to see an artist develop their craft and then keep honing their style bit by bit rather than getting lazy or trying to constantly reinvent themselves.
ID: 81272 No.9082
Not meaning to criticize their stuff but it's painful that there aren't any edits of their stuff .w.
ID: edfd4 No.9083
Calling it now, it will cut away to someone else, and the sex will be implied.
ID: ceb05 No.9126
To be fair this isn't a porn comic and they've had a "very" busy day.
ID: 7a029 No.9135
I am the only one who finds that kind of crossovers absolutely retarded?
ID: b7751 No.9190
All the Butt Touching!